https://gist.github.com/lxe/4cd2ca0fd3b714b25f138227c8c650d3
I've been iterating on this writing clarity prompt. The term we came up with was "Asyndetic parataxis with referential ellipsis and repeated rhetorical closure." It doesn't fully describe the exact issue I have with modern AI writing, but it's close.
Try making it write the full draft and then correct it, it's the most efficient way and you'll likely need way fewer correction instructions.