gg, not bad.

> but I thought a demo would make the landing page quite heavy

Just pack a slick, slim demo into it's own section right under the themes, which I'd put above the "Write freely in the editor." section.

And have a ToC of your landing page visibly present ... I scrolled once and was annoyed by the speed of the vid and how useless the "Write freely ..." section felt in the context built by the landing page thus far ...

> I was trying to keep it under a minute

...

Keep the vid slightly under 90 seconds and don't lead with that flow diagram... A good Anime intro or movie trailer you see once and sign up for the run.

I almost tried it but because it said __sign up__ I didn't.

I had a bit of a weird time getting what Bloffy's thing was ...