Having the LLM rewrite your writing always, in my experience, loses any sense of what the author cared about, everything is given monotone weight instead of somethings more important than others.

But does your writing have to become blunted after a red-team _review_? You're running a technical blog and want to detect technical errors, that's great - a red-team review sounds like something that would tell you the technical errors and you'd fix those up without rewriting your words.