You may appreciate my own contribution, https://www.jerf.org/iri/post/2958/ , which includes an entire section titled "If They're So Wonderful Why Aren't They In My Favorite Language?", a section explaining why IO is not a good lens to understand monads and why "monads" don't really have anything to do with "making IO possible" (very common misconception), as well as what I believe to be one of the more practical applications of monads as a way of generating an audit log of how a particular value came to be what it is without. That example specifically arose from one of the rare instances I used the monad pattern in my own real code. Though I still didn't abstract out the monad interface, because if you only have one, that does you no good. The entire point of an interface is to have multiple implementations. It just happens to be a data type that could have implemented the monad interface, if there had been any use for such a thing in my code, which there wasn't.
I read this years ago and I think it's the best one I've read. Thanks for writing it!