It's not setting off any LLM alarm bells to me. It just reads like any other scientific article, which is very often soulless

It repeats a few points too many times for a professional writer to not catch it.

I don’t mind that they let an LLM write the text, but they should at least have edited it.

the subheadings are extremely AI IMHO

Isn't that just a normal way to organize a large document?