I'm gonna be contrarian here and disagree: the text looks fine to me. In my opinion, comments like "my eyes start to bleed when reading this LLM slop" says more about those readers' inclinations to knee-jerk than the text's actual quality and substance.

Reminds me of people who instinctively call out "AI writing" every time they encounter emdash. Emdash is legitimate. So is this text.