I found the article hard to read. I turned on reader mode. I still found it hard to read. Each sentence is very short. My organic CPU spins trying to figure out how each sentence connects to the next. Each sentence feels more like a paragraph, or a tweet, instead of having a flow. I think that's my issue with it.

If it was written in turgid prose people would be frantically waggling their AI accusatory fingers.

Instead he writes Buzzfeed style: a sentence per paragraph, and then smushes several paragraphs into one.

(The idea being, a paragraph usually introduces a new thought.)