It doesn't even get to its main point, which is that it's about connections between trains, until halfway through. And then it goes into privatization vs nationalization.
A good article should tell you what it's about in its first few paragraphs. But the beginning of this article is some weird high-concept claim that isn't what the rest of it is about, and completely deserves GP's criticism.
To be fair, the article is terribly written.
It doesn't even get to its main point, which is that it's about connections between trains, until halfway through. And then it goes into privatization vs nationalization.
A good article should tell you what it's about in its first few paragraphs. But the beginning of this article is some weird high-concept claim that isn't what the rest of it is about, and completely deserves GP's criticism.