I appreciate your efforts :)

I think what gets me is there's 6 paragraphs in a row that either start with "Modernism" or have it in the first sentence, and it comes along with words like "transcends", "echoes", "essence", "exude", "crafts." They're good paragraphs by themselves and make good points, I just think that together they come out a little breathless, and maybe some consolidation is in order :)

I notice from your profile that you haven't submitted your site to HN, I think you should do so, I think it would generate some interesting discussion.