I'm not sure I agree. The first few sections are clear, concise, supported by links to observations you expect, and cover exactly what you say is missing:
> THE PROBLEM
> THE CURRENT, PASSIVE, ANSWER
> AN ALTERNATIVE, ACTIVE, ANSWER
> A MORE FRUGAL ANSWER
> SUPPORTIVE EVIDENCE
Here's a direct link to that last section:
https://theeggandtherock.com/i/158515951/supportive-evidence
Edit: Alright, as I get further into the article I see more and more what you're mentioning...
> Edit: Alright, as I get further into the article I see more and more what you're mentioning...
I was waiting for this edit but didn’t want to be mean about it :-)
Appreciate your patience! :-)